Friday, September 11, 2009

EDRG 3344

Writing is a PROCESS!!!! Writing has 5 stages. First stage is prewritting were the writer brainstorms ideas. Second is drafting writing the rough draft or outline.Third is revising making additions or deleting things that don't make sense. Fourth is editing, make sure the words are spelled right and punctuation. We text to much nowadays and abbreviate. Final step is publishing showing all your hard work off.
The one place I have always wanted to go since i was a child is Disney World. I will most definitely be taking my son. I have always wanted to go it's a lifelong dream, so I will be living vicariously threw my son.
Our first plane ride was the best! We got to sit by the window. At first we were both apprehensive but it wasn't as bad as i thought. My son enjoyed being able to be on a plane. The take off and landing were a little shaky but we did it!
When we arrived at the park, it was amazing! Everything was so colorful. We stayed at a hotel inside the park. We got to eat in a Disney themed restaurant everyday. Our room was really nice and on a high level floor.
Of course being super excited we went to the park. The first park was the best. We got to get on all the rides and everything was so Disney. The Disney characters were always in character. The best part was my son got to take pictures with different Disney characters and met them. We got to go to all the parks. It was so much fun.
We didn't want to leave but we new the vacation would end. We pack and I had to buy an extra suitcase for our souvenirs. This was our second plane ride unfortunately it was back home. We slept on the way home and were really tired. We arrived home and my son couldn't stop talking about our vacation.

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